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| Writer: | Jane Espenson |
| Director: | Marita Grabiak |
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"Storyteller," like other classic comedy episodes of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, manages to be extremely funny while also having rousing character development and a heart. I'm the first to admit that, until now, Andrew has been little more than comic relief -- great comic relief, but otherwise just a two-dimensional character. Season 6 gave him a little bit of depth and insight, but nothing particularly mind-blowing as both the established Jonathan and Warren got a lot more attention. "Storyteller" manages to frankly do the impossible: give a character that successfully traverses the incredibly fine line between funny and stupid some real depth and end up turning him into a three-dimensional character. How does Buffy continue -- right to its very end -- to pierce the emotional core of these people? I don't know how the writers do it, but it's one of the largest factors that make the series so unique even among other quality shows.
Before I jump into the focus of the episode, I'd like to make a few comments about some of the ancillary material along with the plot. Andrew interviews Anya and Xander one year to the day he left her at the altar -- and how about that, it really is exactly one year since "Hell's Bells" [6x16]. With one year to think everything through, Xander still feels he made the right decision in not marrying Anya at that time. It's nice to see them both admit their continued love for each other, even though they both know they'll never be officially together again. I also loved the epilogue to their little story, with both of them having sex for "one last time" that clearly isn't one last time. The uncertainty at the end of the scene really sums up how complex and fragile relationships can be and how careful we need to be about the choices we make surrounding them.
If there's one complaint I have with "Storyteller" -- but more largely with the season as a whole -- it's that everything surrounding the Seal of Danzalthar is very confusing. It's never adequately explained why it's acting up right now as opposed to any other time. There certainly hasn't been enough build-up to the outburst it's exhibiting here. It's also never fully explained what the heck it even is. Apparently this thing existed under the old high school too, and that it used to be under the library. I can sort of piece together the mythology surrounding this thing in my head, but I would have really appreciated some more concrete facts about it, what it can do, and why a giant cavern is underneath it. The writers are molding the Seal to be able to do whatever the plot demands, and that reeks of sloppy plotting. Because of the lack of coherence here, "Storyteller" suffers a tiny bit by being associated with it.
There's really very little else to dislike about "Storyteller" though. Early on there's a hilarious scene where Andrew is filming the girls at breakfast fantasizing a slow-motion everything-is-happy montage. He says that Buffy is "beautiful, with a lion's heart and the face of an angel. She's never afraid 'cause she knows her side will always win. Buffy and Spike have some kind of history. You can feel the heat between them. Although, technically, as a vampire, he's room temperature," and that Anya is "a feisty waif with a firey temper and a vulnerable heart that she hides, even from herself." Andrew's "film" is all about side-lining the gritty details of these peoples' lives for the shiny idealized -- yet partially true -- image he sees them as.
Buffy ends up getting frustrated over Andrew's camera work which mutates into a whole new long speech. The episode wisely pans back from her speech, even poking fun at it with Andrew leaving the room saying, "honestly, gentle viewers, these motivational speeches of hers tend to get a little long." Note that, up to this episode at least, I've never really had a problem with any of Buffy's speeches. It's at this time where Andrew takes the time to explain how he wants to present himself to us, the real viewers. Much like the slow-motion Wheaties (sorry, "Wheat-flakes") montage a moment before, he completely roses up his past and who he is today. He says, "You see, I am a man with a burden. A man with a dark past. You see, I was once a super villain." We even begin to see him make huge alterations to past events to make him come out in a better -- victimized or just -- light.
A little further into the episode, when Buffy drags Andrew into trying to shut the Seal down, he makes a comment that further cements the role he wants to play: "I'm not a part of this. I document, I don't participate. I'm a detached journalist, recording with a neutral eye." Andrew eventually alludes to the idea of redemption for himself. Even though he clearly still has a comic book level of sophistication on what redemption is, it's still a hint to the fact that deep down there is something going on in him -- otherwise he wouldn't even bring it up.
When Buffy threatens to spill his blood on the Seal, a powerful scene emerges where Andrew's emotional barriers -- blocked by layers of comedy -- are finally broken down. Kudos to Tom Lenk for pulling out his emotional acting chops here. Jane Espenson does a phenomenal job at taking a character that was perceived almost entirely for laughs, and making him emotionally real and bringing him up to the same level as some of the other seconday characters throughout the series. With Andrew, we suddenly now have the beginnings of a fleshed out character. Impressive work.
Andrew learns a lot when he believes his life is at risk, and I was particularly moved by his genuine cheering of Buffy's leadership so far ("No, you're doing great. Really. Kudos."). When Buffy asks him if her sacrifice of him will "redeem" him, he honestly cries out, "No! Because I killed him. Because I listened to Warren, and I pretended I thought it was him, but I knew it wasn't. And I killed Jonathan. And now you're gonna kill me. And I'm scared, and I'm going to die. And this is what Jonathan felt." That last part, about feeling what he put Jonathan through, gives him a new layer of maturity and self reflection that he never possessed before. I also liked the dark nod implying that if Andrew's tears didn't close the Seal, Buffy may have actually tried to spill his blood. This further cements the fact that Andrew is still in no way Buffy's friend or close ally, despite her intent not to kill him. He still has a long way to go before he earns that kind of respect from Buffy, but he makes a great start through his actions here.
The final scene of the episode, with Andrew recording himself speaking, is quite moving. Here we have someone who is now completely honest with himself and his sins, and is genuinely wanting to atone for them -- not in the easy-way-out comic book way of before. He says, "Here's the thing. I killed my best friend. There's a big fight coming, and I don't know what's going to happen. I don't even think I'm going to live through it. That's, uh, probably the way it should be."
"Storyteller" gives Andrew his chance to shine and become a memorable part of the Buffy canon that's not just simply comic relief anymore. It's also the last comedy-heavy episode in the entire series. Jane Espenson clearly relishes the opportunity on both counts and runs with it. Between the hilarious comedy, solid character material, and emotional resonance in the last person you'd expect to find it, we have a real winner here. Now... how 'bout that Cheese Man!
| - | Minor Pros/Cons (+/-) |
| Pros: | |
| + | The opening scene with Andrew sitting in a mansion filled with geek memorabilia. |
| + | Andrew's big board and his explanation of the First. |
| + | The clever editing of Dark Willow from S6 for Andrew's imagination. |
| + | The references to early Buffy episodes ranging from the invisible girl ("Out of Mind, Out of Sight" [1x11]) to swim team monsters ("Go Fish" [2x20]) to prom dogs ("The Prom" [3x20]). |
| + | The quick cut to Andrew's Big Board during the conversation between Buffy and Wood. |
| + | Andrew panning his camera right past Willow and Kennedy kissing to check out Xander's work on fixing Buffy's oft-destroyed window. |
| + | The pig Andrew failed to kill in "Never Leave Me" [7x09] running by Wood and Buffy. |
| + | Spike acting all bad-ass on camera just for Andrew's video. |
| + | Andrew getting choked up over Xander and Anya's expressions of love for each other. |
| + | Seeing how bringers are created. |
| + | The Cheese Man and his plate of cheese both getting about 1 frame each in the Mexico flashback sequence! |
| + | The "We Are as Gods" song. Oh... my. |
| + | All the comments about everyone hating the cheerleaders. |
| Cons: | |
| - | Why is it that Andrew says, about the knife, "There was a carving on the blade -- I thought it was just some pattern," when just a moment later he knows exactly what language it is on the spot? How does that make any sense? |
| - | Foreshadowing |
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| - | Quotes |
| ANYA: | For God's sake, Andrew! You've been in here for 30 minutes. What are you doing? |
| ANDREW: | Entertaining and educating. |
| ANYA: | Why can't you just masturbate like the rest of us? |
| ANDREW: | But the story needs to be told. |
| ANYA: | Birds need to fly, and girls need to use the toilet, and why were you video taping yourself, anyway? Sounds like kinky business to me. |
| WARREN: | What'll it do to Buffy? |
| ANDREW: | Make her super magnetic! |
| JONATHAN: | Wow, she won't be able to get out of her car. |
| WARREN: | And knives and other sharp things will fly at her. |
| ANDREW: | We could walk right by her, and she wouldn't be able to stop us. |
| WARREN: | Unless we were wearing metal belt buckles, then we would stick to her. |
| ANDREW: | In my plan, we are beltless! |
| ANDREW: | Dawn is a typical American teenager. Bubbly and sweet with a hunger for fun and a smile that lights up the room. |
| DAWN: | Hello! |
| ANDREW: | Dawn used to be a key. I don't really know what that means. |
| BUFFY: | My guess? It's that seal thing in the basement. It's like all the hellmouth's energy is trying to escape in that one little spot, and it's getting all- |
| WOOD: | Focusy. |
| BUFFY: | Careful. You're starting to speak like me now. |
| WOOD: | You have visions? |
| BUFFY: | Sometimes. |
| WOOD: | Oh. Well, how do you know that they're not just dreams? |
| BUFFY: | You're running to catch the bus naked? That's a dream. Army of vicious vampire creatures? That's a vision. Also, I was awake. |
| WOOD: | A bus to where? I mean an army of how many? |
| ANDREW: | Is that true, Xander? Do you still love her? |
| ANYA: | You keep dodging the question. |
| XANDER: | I don't mean to. It's just... you know how I feel, right? And you were the one who didn't want to keep seeing each other. |
| ANYA: | And here's where we hop on the merry-go-round of rotating knives. I blame you, and you blame me, and we both end up all cut to shreds. Please just tell: do you still love me? |
| WOOD: | Tell us about the Seal. |
| ANDREW: | But it tickles, and I'm all tense. Can't I have a cool, refreshing Zima!? |
| BUFFY: | No Zima. |
| SPIKE: | Shut your face about the Zima. Just talk. |
| ANDREW: | Pretty knife, except the, uh, the stabbing. I don't think I can do it. Jonathan has been a good friend to me here in Meh-hee-co. He said he'll buy me a burro! |
| BUFFY: | Kennedy, search his stuff. Find the knife. |
| ANDREW: | It's not in my stuff. It's in the kitchen, in the cutlery drawer. You didn't have any steak knives. |
| WILLOW: | You put your old murder weapon in with our utensils!? |
| ANDREW: | I washed it... |
| BUFFY: | Be quiet! I don't want a biographer, especially a murderer. |
| ANDREW: | Yeah, well, see, about that... we just keep tossing that word around, but that's not really what happened. |
| BUFFY: | What? You stabbed Jonathan to death! What were you trying to do? Scratch his back from the front!? |
| ANDREW: | (Narrating) She's like a woman fighting for more than life. She fights like fighting is her life. It's like the air she breathes, and she knows she will win because there is no alternative. |
| - | Score |
| 94/100 | A |
A sharply written episode consisting of zero major mistakes. Usually develops characters in a meaningful manner and is a joy to watch on repeat viewings. Near perfect, but not quite there.
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| 1. | PaulaMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| I really need to watch this episode again for any serious commenting, but thanks and a great job, Mike! On my first round of BtVS, I lost my nerve in late S6 and went googling about the plot for the rest of the series. Learning what was going to be made out of Andrew in S7, I pretty much went, "What?!". Actually watching the season though, it just works. And this episode is excellent (although the Seal of Danzalthar bit is admittedly messy). |
| 2. | DarthMarionMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| Storyteller! Andrew! Tom Lenk! You make justice to this wonderful episode! (can we say that in english? "make justice"?) Whatever, i loved reading this! Great review! Storyteller is really one of Jane's finest work, and I was happy they found the time to trat it so late in the season! Concerning the blurry answer from Buffy to the spilling blood question, I'm glad you see it to! For my french buffyholic friends, there's no reason to think Buffy was going to do that, but for me, she thought of it, and that's enough to make me shiver! |
| 3. | buffyholicMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| This episode rocks and your review is pretty good, although I thought you were gonna rate it a bit higher. I mean, I agree with the confusion about the Seal but that doesn´t even touch the awesomeness of it, imo.
btw, I am anxious to see your take on LMPTM. |
| 4. | KevbotMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| I love love LOVE your review of this. When it was out, a lot of people balked at it, based on the synopsis rather than the episode itself. "This isn't good because it's about Andrew and Andrew is a shallow character." This is absolutely in my Top 10 ever, and I'm so pleased you liked it this much. |
| 5. | llinnaeMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| "Andrew's 'film' is all about side-lining the gritty details of these peoples' lives for the shiny idealized -- yet partially true -- image he sees them as". I thought the whole point was that he didn't see them like this at all but rather that he *wanted* to see them and everything else in an idealized manner in order to avoid the fear and pain that come with reality. I think that even before Buffy threatens him he knows deep down that things arent the way he pretends they are. Ironically its the fact that he knows this that makes him pretend that he doesn't. |
| 6. | PaulaMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| I rather agree with llinnae: Andrew pretty much desperately sticks to a fantasy version of reality (or the one of several versions, whichever best suits his needs in any given situation) because he can't deal with what he's done (murdered his friend) and what's going on (apocalypse with no certainty of the good guys being able to save the day). He has a thing or two in common with Faith, actually, although she of course resorted to slightly different sort of escapism. A point of view worth thinking about, though, is that we all do this to some degree. Rewrite stuff, that is. Mostly quite unintentionally, too, as human senses and memory are in fact not at all reliable and are easily manipulated either by external factors or by ourselves. I don't doubt that Andrew knew well enough deep down exactly what he had done, but sometimes in our lives it takes indisputable external evidence to establish what we actually did or what happened to us or right in front of us, because we can't reliably tell for one reason or another. |
| 7. | PaulaMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| Of course we all tend commit escapism as well - and that goes double for us who hang around a lot on a Buffy review site. :-P |
| 8. | UrsusMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| One of the few reviews with which I don't agree. Aside from a chuckle here or there, I was bored for most of the episode. Andrew is lame, his sudden confession/emotional breakdown at the end seemed a little forced, and ultimately it didn't turn him into any more of an interesting character. How much better would the episode have been if it really had been Andrew's blood that was needed to close that stupid seal thing, if Andrew killed himself over the seal to atone for his crimes, and the episode would end with a teary eyed Buffy looking into the camera and saying that Andrew finally found his place in the story? Yeah, that would have been a lot more powerful. Plus, it would have gotten rid of the obnoxious character, unless the First decided to take his form to taunt Buffy. |
| 9. | mikejerMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| @Ursus:
It's clear that the enjoyment of the episode will heavily rely of what people think of Andrew. I, personally, find him utterly hilarious as do many others. I respect your opinion, but a lot of people don't find him "obnoxious." One thing I appreciate about Joss Whedon is how he generally won't kill off characters we know really well until they, if conflicted, have obtained or destroyed their redemption. If not conflicted, then they get the chance to come to a final realization about themselves and their progress. Andrew, here in "Storyteller," has just taken the first step towards his redemption. He hasn't earned it yet and wouldn't have earned it -- as he stated himself -- by sacrificing himself here. Andrew actually dying here wouldn't have had much of an effect at all, because before "Storyteller" he wasn't a very complex character. This is entirely why Anya was killed in "Chosen" rather than Andrew. So, in a nutshell, I completely disagree with you. |
| 10. | SamMay 26, 2009 (Tue) | |
| Good evening, gentle viewers. Another spot on review from Mike, who completely realized that this is an A episode. It's Jane Espenson's best comedy episode, and since she's the best comic writer on the series, that means that IMHO this is the funniest episode in the entire series. Kudos to Jane for making us laugh (and think) before the show floors the gas pedal for the very last time. :) |
| 11. | ChristianMay 27, 2009 (Wed) | |
| When I first saw this episode I just thought it was a large amount of wasted camera time on a last minute character. Buffy was going to end and I would have loved to see more of the Scoobies, rather than someone who wasn’t really established as a Buffy loved one. But on my second viewing of this season I really liked this ep. and learned to appreciate Andrew a lot more. Most of the scenes were silly and fun to watch, I especially loved the slow motion breakfast scene. |
| 12. | HarFangMay 27, 2009 (Wed) | |
| A great review! And I appreciate your concentrating more on its significance than on its silly parts (honestly, I physically cringe every time I have to watch the We Are as Gods song). To me this episode is the only excuse for Andrew' continued existence. Up to this point, he didn't even seem to care about what he had done in the past two years, and still he rated a much better treatment than Jonathan after his Superstar blunder, going from prisoner to "guestage" in barely a few weeks. This didn't feel right, so I thank Jane Espenson for finally addressing this question, and managing to turn 35mn of comedy into a really moving last scene (and congrats to Tom Lenk for that particular performance) Oh, and just a tragic anecdote about this episode: I spent months trying to convince my family to give a shot at BtVS. And THIS was the one episode my mother chose to sit down and watch with me... I honestly don't think she could have picked a worst episode to start. |
| 13. | p0mp0mMay 27, 2009 (Wed) | |
Mike, I was wondering... You didn't mention in your review the obvious reference to the original series of "The Storyteller" with John Hurt, produced by Jim Henson. See http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0092383/ This hommage was just another reason why I found this episode such a joy to watch by the way :) |
| 14. | AdamMay 27, 2009 (Wed) | |
| I really don't like this episode. As I've mentioned countless times, I'm not a fan of season 7 at all. I rewatched this episode for a third time a couple of weeks ago and I really didn't feel that much watching it. Of course there were a few funny scenes here and there and the end was kind of good, but it still wasn't a very memorable episode. It was kind of boring and the plot is not well done (which brings the episode down a lot). I don't know, I'd give it an 80, maybe an 85 for some effort.
And, good review of course! As much as I disagree with some of it, I'm appreciative for all the time you spend making these insightful reviews for us. |
| 15. | BeppeMay 31, 2009 (Sun) | |
| For me, this is the episode that justifies the otherwise dire season 7 (well ok, Buffy rising in slo-mo in Chosen made me kinda teary). The season suffered, among other things, from the simple fact that the writers ran out of interesting things to say beyond the immediate monster hunting/soap opera context. But here we see a common human trait -- reimagining and editing our past to suit our present needs -- given an intelligent and funny treatment. Bonus points for making Andrew a moving and relevant character, even if it didn't last. |
| 16. | LighsJun 7, 2009 (Sun) | |
| @Harfang- this was the first (and only) Buffy episode that my father saw as well. I figured that the combination of humor and poignancy would draw him in, but he couldn't see past the silliness. In retrospect, it probably would seem like forty-four minutes of mindless entertainment to someone who had no knowledge of the characters. Though I completely agree that this was an A episode, I thought that some of the scenes in Sunnydale High were a bit over-the-top. A student's head exploding, another student fading away in the middle of the hallway, Buffy's clumsy-sounding exposition to Principal Wood about the effects of the Hellmouth... I couldn't suspend my disbelief at all during that scene. It was too much, too fast, and it felt tacked-on. There should have been a better way to express that the Seal was acting up. |
| 17. | SamJun 8, 2009 (Mon) | |
| I have to include this exchange because it's one of the funniest I've ever heard. Buffy walks in on Andrew filming morning in Slayer Central and wants him to stop filming, and the potentials chime in: RONA: I don't know. If we save the world, it will be kind of nice to have a record of it. AMANDA: If we don't save the world, then nothing matters. KENNEDY: Hmm. That's catchy, Amanda. Let's make that our slogan! (burst out laughing) Of course, all of the hilarity on display in this episode is doubly potent because of all the heart underneath it all. Jane Espenson FTW on this one. |
| 18. | IanAug 10, 2009 (Mon) | |
| "It's never adequately explained why [the Seal of Danzalthar] is acting up right now as opposed to any other time." I feel this is attributable to the increased activity of the First, is it not? This is especially indicated by the use of the Seal to create Bringers as shown in this episode. Evidently the Seal is a tool that the First can activate and make use of to further its ends. |
| 19. | ChrisDec 9, 2009 (Wed) @ 5:08am | |
| I would put this as a perfect episode. The comedy,drama and character development all at their best. Laughing out loud near the start and struglling not to cry at the end. |
| 20. | SamDec 9, 2009 (Wed) @ 6:29am | |
| I agree, Chris. This is #20 on my Top 25. An amazing episode. |
| 21. | Nathan.TaurusJan 6, 2010 (Wed) @ 4:19pm | |
| The evil, ancient seal is stopped by tears! What?
I don't agree to killing Andrew yet but I think it would have worked out better if Buffy had to stab him and spill a few drops on the seal for it to stop. It would also be a preview for the next episode where Buffy acknowledges that she would let Dawn die. It would show here that that statement is correct, that she will do whatever she has to for the greater good. That said it could be something other than his blood, but I didn't buy that tears would do it. On a different note, I laughed my arse off with Andrew's line of, "In my plan, we are beltless." Such a simple line, yet so funny to me. Principal Wood saying "focusy" and his line asking, "a bus to where?" are also great. And the Buffy/Andrew scene around the seal is still my favourite scene in the episode. Especially with Buffy's final look to him. |
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