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DOOMED (4x11)
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A review by Mikelangelo "MikeJer" Marinaro,
February 26, 2006

Writer: Marti Noxon, David Fury, and Jane Espenson
Director: James A. Contner

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WARNING: This is a retrospective review and may contain SPOILERS. Read at your own discretion.

- Review

This is a really good episode with a terrible plot, which is quite possibly the most inept of the entire series. The plot itself is not funny, it's hokey, and it really tears apart the show's respect for the hard work other villains go through to try to end the world. Apparently all it takes nowadays is the blood of a man, the bones of a child, and a talisman. After watching this, how does the writer not expect us to beg the question, "how in the hell does this world even exist right now if that's all it takes to destroy it?" Even in the midst of great character continuity, I can't help but be disgusted by how insulting this plot is. This is a giant complaint which drastically pulls the score down. I can handle silly, sloppy, or useless plots, but not completely inept ones. While I'm at it, I'll just pass right over the fact that "we've already done this" before, many times.

Anyway, lets move on to the good. First off, I've got to point out how much I respect Whedon and the writing team for letting us hear the conversation that was left open at the end of "Hush" (4x10). Lesser shows would have taken the easier route and just given us little hints about what happened. Instead we get an interesting exchange between the two of them. Riley starts it off by commenting on her strength and speed. Her response, "Also passionate, artistic and inquisitive," goes to show that she is still bothered when defined completely by her Slayerness. Even though she's accepted her role as the Slayer she still, at least deep down, will forever want to be recognized as a human being. This theme goes back to the beginning of the series, but the most recent example of it is in "Homecoming" (3x05).

Riley shows up in the cemetary later and his presence and location likely bring back memories of Angel. Boyfriend who fights demons in the cemetary with her. She might have even remembered the final picnic her and Angel shared in the cemetary, the one in "Choices" (3x19) when she said the Mayor didn't know what he was talking it. Her relationship with Riley is now looking pretty 'doomed' and she's terrified that she'll end up just being hurt again. Riley's response to all this skepticism is strong. He says, "Buffy, I'm thrown by this, I'm confused... But I can feel my skin humming, my hands, my every inch of me. I've never been this excited about anybody before. I'm not trying to scare you, and I'm not going to force myself on you. But I'm, by God, not going to walk away because I think it might not work."

This Buffy and Riley conflict continues all throughout the episode. Later on Riley tells Buffy she's self-involved and has a "doom and gloom" outlook on life. To Riley it really is an adventure and he doesn't know what she's been through. Buffy has to be self-involved, to an extent, to do her job. I really sympathize with both of them though. Riley's just ignorant about what he's getting himself into and Buffy's genuinely worried about being hurt again -- she has every right to be. It's unfortunate that at the very end of the episode we see Buffy completely disregard everything she told Riley earlier. I don't fully understand why she would change her mind, and especially that quickly. Riley happened to help her out during the big fight, so that was enough to convince her they can successfully work together? I think that's the point they were trying to get across, but I'm not convinced at all. We find out later that even though Buffy decides to have a relationship with Riley, she never does fully open up her heart to him like she did with Angel. This way she can still have a relationship without risking that pain. The fact she's closed off her heart stems directly back to the events of "Becoming Pt. 2" (2x22), which left a permanent scar on her heart that won't be fully healed by series end.

Xander, on the other hand, has a new job as a pizza delivery guy. It's nice to get an update on his ever-changing stable-job search. This job obviously isn't going to last very long. The focus, though, is definitely on Willow and Spike here. While at a party Willow spots Percy (the guy she tutored back in high school) and walks over for a chat. He is polite enough to her but when his girlfriend says he was checking her out, his defense is to put down Willow and call her a nerd behind her back. Of course she overhears this and is genuinely hurt. She's worked hard to create a new persona for herself in college with the new hair and her huge appetite for powerful magic.

In a few words Percy was able to make Willow doubt the change in herself -- he makes her feel like a nerdy high school girl again, even though she isn't that person anymore. I know exactly how this can feel, though, as there's been times when I thought I knew my stuff when someone with more self-confidence came along and made me feel like I hadn't learned anything at all. When the group gathers to discuss the dead guy Willow found, we find out that she's more upset about Percy's comment than the fact she was trying to sleep next to a bled dead guy. I also love how she sounds like she's all upset about the murder. She says, "There was so much blood, and there - there was a symbol, and Percy said I was a nerd!" This is another wonderful BtVS moment of mixing drama with humor.

There's a couple things happening with Spike here as well. On the surface it seems like the writers are using him purely for comic relief, and the character is suffering as a result. If you look a little further, though, there's a lot more going on. Early on we see Spike still stuck in Xander's basement. This is Hawaiian Spike, who's stuck wearing a Hawaiian shirt and looks completely pathetic. Xander tells him that he's not even worth beating up, and we can immediately tell that this severely hurts Spike. We see this through James Marsters' fantastic subtle face gestures which he's so good at. This is the moment Spike reaches the low point of his existence. He's so useless and frustrated that he tries to stake himself. This is entirely in character based on what we've seen of him earlier, especially in "Lover's Walk" (3x08). When I first watched this episode I was beginning to get concerned that they were ruining Spike, but now that I know what's in store for him I realise all of this is just natural development based on what he's been through, and that he'll regain a lot his 'cool' early in S5.

Once he's saved from staking himself he discovers he does have a weapon to hurt the Scoobies after all. His speech to Willow and Xander about how useless they are is simply wonderful. This plays off of Percy's nerd comment to Willow earlier, and Xander's lack of job stability. Plus, as is usual from Spike, there's just enough truth thrown in (how they're just Buffy's sidekicks and that she's too soft to cut them loose) to get them thinking about it. Spike's huge grin after realising how successful he was at making Willow and Xander feel more worthless than him says it all. Anyway, this episode has a lot of good character development while unfortunately possessing, quite possibly, the most inept plot in the history of the series. The former barely saves it from the pit of despair (a.k.a. below a C-).



- Minor Pros/Cons (+/-)
Pros:
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Buffy shocking Riley with how much knowledge she has on the Initiative.
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Riley not knowing what the Slayer is.
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Spike trying to hit Xander with a wrench. His head explodes in pain and Xander doesn't even notice. haha.
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Forrent perceiving the demons as animals.
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How often partiers and frat boys die on BtVS.
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Buffy flips back up and accidentally attacks Riley.
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Buffy referring to Faith's coma in her relationship debate with Riley.
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Riley's excuses for his outfit. "Paintball!"
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Spike desparately wanting to go out and kill things while Xander and Willow just want to watch TV.
  
Cons:
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The demons want to end the world, yet they leave Giles alive? Why?
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The demons are trying to open the hellmouth...again. *sigh*
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There's just a big hole in the ground the demons jump into to make the world end. How? Why?
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I like Spike's 'moves' after he discovers he can hurt demons, but the music is incredibly hokey and his line, "I'm a bloody animal!," is terrible.


- Quotes
RILEY:  
What are you?
BUFFY:  
Capricorn on the cusp of Aquarius. You?

XANDER:  
No, you look like a big mooch that doesn't lift a finger around here. But I have to get to work.
SPIKE:  
Yeah, delivering melted cheese on bread, doing your part to keep America constipated.

BUFFY:  
Wow. I wasn't sure where the party was, and then I saw the flashing lights and the ambulance, and I was like, right, of course! Death, carnage - it's a Buffy party!

RILEY:  
I'm just trying to... make up my mind about something. Buffy... she's pretty cool, isn't she?
FORREST:  
(sighs) Yes already, she's cool, she's hot, she is tepid, she's all temperature Buffy.

BUFFY:  
Tell me about this symbol.
WILLOW:  
Right, it was carved into his chest, like a big creepy eye.
XANDER:  
It's kind of the CBS logo. Hey, could this be the handiwork of one Mr. Morley Schafer?

GILES:  
It's the end of the world.
WILLOW, XANDER AND BUFFY:  
Again!?

RILEY:  
Yeah, well, I'm no Slayer. (To Radio) Base one, this is lilac one.
BUFFY:  
Lilac?
RILEY:  
Confirmed sighting of an unidentified Sub-T. Mobilize patrol team for debriefing at 0800 hours.
BUFFY:  
Very commandory - lilac not withstanding.

XANDER:  
Think of the happy. If we don't find what we're looking for, we face an apocalypse.
SPIKE:  
Really? You're not just saying that?

XANDER:  
Sunnydale High. These walls -- if they were still walls -- what stories they could tell. Eew! Mayor meat. Extra crispy.

RILEY:  
(Notices Spike) Don't I know you?
SPIKE:  
Me? (Affecting a bad Texan accent) No. No, sir. I'm just an old pal of Xander's here.

SPIKE:  
What's this? Sitting around watching the telly while there's evil still a foot? That's not very industrious of you. I say we go out there and kick a little demon ass! What, can't go without your Buffy, is that it? Too chicken? Let's find her! She is the Chosen One after all. Come on! Vampires! Grrr! Nasty! Let's annihilate them. For justice - and for - the safety of puppies - and Christmas, right? Let's fight that evil! - Let's kill something!


- Score Learn about the Grading Scale
60/100 C-
Very flawed. Either the main plot is completely insulting or there's some out-of-characterness going on. Avoids falling into uselessness by way of some good character development and/or insight.


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1.DingdongJun 2, 2006 (Fri)View This Person's Comments | Link
I've just seen Doomed, after having recorded it yesterday, so I looked up your review, mikejer.

I agree with practically everything you say there, but I must say the critisms you raise don't effect my enjoyment as much as they evidently did for you. I have to admit, the plot is rather dodgy, but personally I don't think it affects the episode all that much. The reason for this is that I don't think that dodgy plots are as rare in the Whedonverse as people might like to think. For instance, "The Zeppo" takes the piss even more than this episode regarding the apocalypse. I know this was in the interests of parody, but in all honesty I'm not sure if "Doomed" isn't also. Another example is "Happy Anniversary", which is actually very similar to "Doomed". That was an episode which had, if possible, a more inept plot than "Doomed", yet redeemed itself with great character comedy and development. Or maybe it's just the fact that I'm less interested in good plots and more interested in good writing, charcterisation and acting in television - after all I started watching television regularly with Star Trek, so I had to be lax in the area of contrived circumstances and plots! ;)

By the way, this definately is not a criticism of the review. I'm just interested as to how different people's enjoyment was affected by the plot shortcomings.

2.MikeJerJun 2, 2006 (Fri)View This Person's Comments | Link
Most of the time, I completely agree that characterization > plot. Whedonverse plots are rarely ever very original. I think this comment sums it up, "I can handle silly, sloppy, or useless plots, but not completely inept ones."

It's just too brainless and too hokey for it not to greatly affect my feeling on the episode. It would have gotten an easy F if there wasn't a lot of awesome character interaction in it. Those scenes save it from complete suckiness. But as a reviewer I can't completely disregard the plot when considering evaluation of an episode. And this plot is so inept and hokey that it brings the episode down. Imo. But generally I really do agree with you.

3.GroundedJun 2, 2006 (Fri)View This Person's Comments | Link
Spike's attempted suicide in a hawaiian shirt is enough to save Doomed from it's own terrible plot. :D

4.DingdongJun 3, 2006 (Sat)View This Person's Comments | Link
But better still is James Masters' redering of the English Accent faking an American one - priceless!

5.DingdongalisticJan 17, 2007 (Wed)View This Person's Comments | Link
I know it has a contrived plot, but I've always loved this episode. It has great humour, characterisation, wit and some deep themes and knows not to take itself too seriously. I much prefer it to "The Zeppo", which was the same except without the deep themes, wit and good characterisation.

6.TranquillityMar 27, 2007 (Tue)View This Person's Comments | Link
Just watched this episode and was struck by how many corn-ball lines are used throughout - the writing seemed so amature! for my money, one of the worst written episodes ever, and it took three of them to do such a bad job!

7.TranquillityMar 27, 2007 (Tue)View This Person's Comments | Link
that said, the ending makes the entire episode forgivable. 'let's go fight that evil!'

8.junMay 22, 2007 (Tue)View This Person's Comments | Link
Heh. I wonder if three people were required just to try to salvage as much as could be from the earlier efforts of others.

I still like this ep, though. I'm on a S4 rewatch; I'd forgotten how much I love it.

9.NixJul 9, 2007 (Mon)View This Person's Comments | Link
Pedant point: `her and Angel' should be `she and Angel'.

10.AustinAug 26, 2007 (Sun)View This Person's Comments | Link

- QUOTE -
"We find out later that even though Buffy decides to have a relationship with Riley, she never does fully open up her heart to him like she did with Angel. This way she can still have a relationship without risking that pain. The fact she's closed off her heart stems directly back to the events of Becoming Pt. 2 (2x22), which left a permanent scar on her heart that won't be fully healed by series end."
I am really confused by Buffy's relationship with Riley. He says that she doesn't love him, as do you, mikejer, but then why does she run to the chopper when he is leaving and why is she so heart broken? And is the emotional scar from Angelus' actions or from the fact that she had to stab angel? And since he came back, isn't it really just because he left her, which means that it's nothing really extraordinary since rough breakups happen all the time. Like I said, I really don't understand Buffy's relational woes.

I would really like to hear everyone's oppinions, is there a thread on the discussion board about Buffy's relationships, and if so, could someone point me to it?

Thanks

11.buffyholicNov 5, 2007 (Mon)View This Person's Comments | Link
Okay, the plot is very, very bad but I think that the dialogue and character interaction is wonderful and really elevates the episode a little. The dialogue is very witty.
I think you were a little harsh on this episode. I think it deserves a 66, at least. But that´s my opinion.

12.gabrielleabelleNov 10, 2007 (Sat)View This Person's Comments | Link
I'm with you on the plot. On first viewing, I didn't like this ep (with the exception of Spike's speech at the end). But when I rewatched it, I focused on everything but the plot and came out enjoying it. I understand the parallel they were trying to make with the "doom" of the apocalypse and the "doom" of Buffy in relationships. But the ritual and attempted apocalypse just come out hokey.

13.TonyJul 17, 2008 (Thu)View This Person's Comments | Link
I never had realized how cheesy the plot was before I read this. I personally just hate the whole Buffy/Riley relationship. Riley is definitely one of the worst characters in my opinion. But yeah, Spike at the end in Xander's basement is hilarious.

14.JadenJul 20, 2008 (Sun)View This Person's Comments | Link
well alot of big bads create apocalypses over different amounts of times. big bads like the mayor and glory had pre-determined plans which defined and shaped the plot of the season while other big bads like angelus and dark willow took only about a minute to get their plans underway. but still i did strongly dislike the overuse of apocalypses (it makes me question what makes the season finale ones so special.

15.DaveMay 29, 2009 (Fri)View This Person's Comments | Link
For me the episode gains a few bonus points for finally (and incredibly belatedly) showing us the resulting damage to the high school since "Graduation Day- Part 2". The school was like home for three years and it's not until this episode that we get to see what became of it after the explosion, although I would have lied a better shot of the remnants of the library. Special props to Xander for referencing the Mayor, since chunks of the demon snake were still laying around in the wreckage. That's one of the things I love about BtVS, they never forget the past.

16.NixJul 13, 2009 (Mon)View This Person's Comments | Link
Hm. Another parallel: the spot where Buffy says 'No' to Riley is the same place from where, one year from now, Riley will leave, and Buffy will arrive too late to take back a no.

17.Lollypop75Aug 10, 2009 (Mon)View This Person's Comments | Link
I'm rewatching Buffy, and am surprised by how much I'm actually enjoying Season 4. I quite enjoyed this episode.

I was a bit confused by one thing in your review. You didn't get why Buffy suddenly disregarded all the reasons *not* to be with Riley in the end. Watching Doomed this time round, I was pretty sure that the reason she thought she and Riley were doomed was from the earthquake. The last time Buffy experienced an earthquake, she died, and she's understandably anxious this time around, and as a result is feeling somewhat pessimistic.

But then she beats the evil, and I guess realises that sometimes things work out, so she's willing to give it a try. Makes sense to me.

Actually, just going through what I've written and I've remembered the conversation in her room where she says they both need to process before anything happens is before the earthquake. But I think if the earthquake and potential apocalypse weren't an issue she would have decided to go for it.

(I don't think I've used the word earthquake this many times in 3 paragraphs since I was 14 in a Geography lesson.)

18.G1000May 22, 2010 (Sat) @ 9:53amView This Person's Comments | Link
What was so "inept" about this plot? It wasn't particularly interesting, but it wasn't nearly as awful as "Beer Bad" or "The Pack". And the character development made up for it big-time. This one gets a B from me. It's way better than "Pangs", for a start. So far, I'm loving this season.

19.G1000May 22, 2010 (Sat) @ 9:53amView This Person's Comments | Link
Sorry, I meant to say B-plus. Why doesn't the plus key work, anyway?

20.TomSep 11, 2010 (Sat) @ 6:25pmView This Person's Comments | Link
Doug Petrie gave an interview explaining that this was a tough episode to write. He was due to write the episode alone, but he was also getting married. So, the script was handed to Jane and Marti, only they didn't have much time either.

21.FloOct 9, 2010 (Sat) @ 4:44pmView This Person's Comments | Link
I think the plot was indeed meant to be ironic, parodying the frequent apocalypses in the first three seasons.
In fact, it is pretty much a revisiting of Buffy's high school days (the visit by Percy, the world ending "again", the hellmouth in the old school).
Where it becomes a bit hazy is why we are revisiting high school. I suppose it has to do with Buffy leaving behind her traumatic experiences of the past (dying in the season 1 final, having to kill her first love in the season 2 final), and she has to be reminded by Riley that she is no slave to her destiny, and that the world goes on even after "the end of the world".
I suppose what this episode is supposed to mean - in regards to Buffy - is that she has to get over her past to gain new hope and move on with her life. Or something like that...

The problem is though that Buffy didn't really seem to have a problem with getting on with her live before, and that the references to the past are all somewhat random and inconclusive (or maybe my interpretation of them is just projection). It never really becomes clear why she has to get back to high school in this episode.

Also I agree that the plot with the three demons is incredibly bland. It feels like they wantet to spoof those "end of the world" episodes but couldn't come up with a good ieda to do so.

22.NixOct 16, 2010 (Sat) @ 3:47pmView This Person's Comments | Link
The plot isn't actually quite as idiotic as it seems at first sight. It looks like any man's blood would do (and personally I think the demon did the world a service by knocking that guy off), but the talisman has to be *one specific* talisman, and it looks like the child's bones have to be *one specific* child as well: the symbol carved into the chest of the man is identical to the symbol over the mausoleum in which the child's bones lie. (We never learn who this child was, but presumably someone mixed up in dark mojo of some kind.)

So this is a rare combination of artifacts by any standard, not least given that it's just luck that the talisman is anywhere near Sunnydale at all.

(Where the plot fell down was in making this stuff obvious. It took me five or six viewings to realise it...)

23.John RobertsNov 1, 2010 (Mon) @ 5:48amView This Person's Comments | Link
This episode feels like a "pause," following 3 straight terrific episodes. The writers collected their breaths, filled the 45-minute slot, and thought about cool future stuff.

But nothing like a 60 in my book, better than that. Perfectly competent stuff that become more than competent when Spike was on the screen. (Very very good decision to make him a regular. Bad decision to leave out Anya in this episode, like Spike she gives a welcome jolt to the proceedings.) As for the demon plot, the Opening of the Hellmouth has become such a cliche that I don't think it *can* be done seriously. So I regarded this as parody proceedings, a mood that seemed to be echoed by the cast, with all its eye rolling.

I have no problem with Riley so far, don't understand the dislike. Sure he's not a fun character like Spike, he's a straight man, but he's not a whiner or a punk or a smirker or a bore, either. And he's a bright enough fella. You guys would probably love Riley if he had fangs. :-)

24.OsirisJan 13, 2011 (Thu) @ 1:36pmView This Person's Comments | Link
I'm surprised no one has mentioned the awful Giles dub job in the scene where he and Buffy discuss the earthquake (start of Chapter 3 on the DVD). Obviously, ASH had to dub over his lines in post-production for whatever reason (maybe a microphone malfunction?) But it just sounds awful and distracting. It doesn't even sound like ASH, it sounds like someone doing a bad impersonation.

As for your review - I very much enjoyed the opening paragraph. It mirrors my sentiments exactly. This is one of my least favorite episodes in the series, in the same league as 'I, Robot' and 'Beer Bad'. Tom's (the commenter above) story about this episode being rushed due to outside factors does not come as a shock. Although, Tom talks about Doug Petrie, Espenson and Noxon, where as the credited writers are actually David Fury, Espenson and Noxon. If you could post a link to the Doug Petrie interview Tom, that's be great.

25.PippaHallJul 30, 2011 (Sat) @ 1:24pmView This Person's Comments | Link
I just didn't like it when Riley said "..and I'm not going to force myself on you.."
as if you should have to confirm that to someone!

26.Lunatic on a pogostickAug 28, 2011 (Sun) @ 8:56amView This Person's Comments | Link
I think to discredit this episode so greatly because of the bland hokey plot is a real shame mainly because the real strength and reason ive awlays loved this series was its characters,there growth and interactions and this episode has plenty of that. Sure the plot wasnt the strongest but in general the series never had the greatest and original plots.I can excuse the poorly executed plot when i consider what it was trying to do,in forcing the characters to look back on there pasts,specificly buffy and her failed relationship with angel,spike on the big bad he used to be and willow on the nerd weakling persona she thought she had shed.Its not a perfect episode but i dont think the plot should derive from the score so strongly.

27.RosieSep 8, 2011 (Thu) @ 3:48pmView This Person's Comments | Link
I would have given this episode a "B-". The plot regarding the demons' attempt to end the world struck me as rather lame. But the biggest strength about "Doomed" was the character developments for Buffy, Riley, Willow and Spike. And I have a deep suspicion that the demonic plot was nothing more than a catalyst for the characters' development. So, I'm giving this episode a "B-".

28.LucySep 9, 2011 (Fri) @ 5:46amView This Person's Comments | Link
I'm so glad you mentioned Tony Head's weird dubbed voice in the courtyard scene with Buffy, Osiris! That bugs me every time!

Not as much as it bugs me that Buffy comes so so close to not being with Riley! I'm always shouting at the screen when she changes her mind back at the end. Stay away Buffy! He's really really boring!

29.RobOct 22, 2011 (Sat) @ 7:46amView This Person's Comments | Link
The cartoon physics needed for Buffy's jump into the hole to catch up with the third demon always bother me. At least I get to hear Spike say "Xandurrr" shortly thereafter.

30.RobOct 22, 2011 (Sat) @ 8:00amView This Person's Comments | Link
Maybe one of Buffy's special abilities is being able to accelerate in a free fall faster than 9.8 m/s²?

31.nathan.taurusNov 2, 2011 (Wed) @ 1:42amView This Person's Comments | Link
The Good:
-Spike. The shirt. The stake. The fighting. The ending.
-Riley's codename of 'lilac'.
-Returning to the high school. Good effects to show the ruins.
-Riley and his great excuse for being at the school.
The Bad:
-Noxon, Fury, Espenson and Whedon all had a hand in this one. Shocking.
-As mentioned, the awful dubbing sound of Giles.
-The demon stops the door from closing at the party even though he isn't leaving yet.
-No Seal of Danzalthar anywhere to be seen at the Hellmouth opening.
-Buffy and her extreme acceleration while free falling. Maybe you're right, Rob.


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