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2x04: "Untouched"
Review by Ryan Bovay (Ryan-R.B.)
Posted on August 30, 2006
Writer: Mere Smith | Director: Joss Whedon | Air Date: 10/17/2000

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This is a retrospective review and may contain spoilers from anywhere in the series. Read at your own peril.

"Untouched," the final of the four standalones that precede the Darla arc, is a finer piece of work than you'd expect. It's definitely better than 2x01: "Judgement" [2x01] and "First Impressions" [2x03], and though it does fall short of "Are You Now or Have You Ever Been?" [2x02] it remains a solid and intelligent examination of an important subject. The foreshadowing for the main arc continues, as well as the solid character examination that leads us into it. This prelude is no doubt meant to help lure new viewers in too, but in the same vein of episodes like "I've Got You Under My Skin" [1x14] it exists in its own world; through the looking glass is a subject worth thinking about, and episodes like this are bound to make us think.

The premise, despite appearing initially bleak, actually manages to pan out. This could've easily been another "She" [1x13], but luckily we get something far more interesting in the character of Bethany Chaulk, who is made interesting, frightening and sympathetic all at once. As an exercise in standalone entertainment, this is a resounding success. The plot revolves around Bethany, a young woman who possesses dangerous telekentic powers and encounters both Wolfram and Hart and Angel Investigations in her time in L.A. We open with Darla talking about dreams (see quotes below), and she mentions they are the key to control. I was reminded of BtVS "Restless" (4x22), and what those dreams revealed about those characters. Dreams give us representations of our desires (what we want), perceptions (how we see ourselves/others) and our hopes and fears.

Theoretically, to invade or manipulate one's dreams could open the door to all of these things for the neural conqueror. One could attain complete control of someone through such manipulative means. Darla certainly has. She's slowly pulling Angel from his mission, (successfully) encouraging him to lie to his friends about his dreams, and wandering unchecked through the very halls of Angel Investigation's base with a complete all-access pass. She views this as control over Angel, and to some degree she is correct in this point of view. Lilah would certainly agree with it, as we find her searching Lindsey's private office for clues on his latest project.

She and Darla create a parallel to Angel in their views on the definition of control. Lilah represents Wolfram and Hart's ideals: the consolidation of power. Lilah wants to know everything Lindsey is doing so she can react favourably to any given situation, and she and Holland want Bethany's powers adequately developed to suit their purposes. To aid her in unleashing her powers, they hire paid men to attempt to rape and possibly kill her. By so doing, she claims to be giving Bethany the strength to harness her abilities.

The difference between this philosophy and that of Angel's is primarily where it comes from. Wolfram and Hart are interested in the consolidation of their own power and their control over the situation, while Angel's interest is in providing Bethany the strength of will she needs to control herself on her own. Having experienced the same issues with his power and his inner demonic nature, his philosophy is not to unleash her powers recklessly, but to properly contain them by instructing her to direct the abilities she has, and to show her the choices that exist preceding their use. This gives her true strength, the episode purports.

As I mentioned, this episode's greatest attribute is that we see all the sides of Bethany, for better or worse. Sexually abused as a child, her powers developed as a result of the traumatic mental scarring of the acts committed against her by her father, and the complete desperation and lack of control she felt as a result. The metaphor relating to her powers is centered on this: she's been left in a situation that makes her feel isolated, worthless and utterly powerless. She holds fear and distrust for people in general and distances herself from her own existence. Bethany hates to be touched, and yet so very often allows it to happen anyway (going so far as to call herself a slut) because, just like with her powers, she feels helpless in her own skin.

Abuse victims often have a negative connection with casual sex, yet they are much more likely to engage in it. It's the only form of gratification they know (especially if the abuse came from a parent, who is supposed to gratify with love). But the point that Angel and Cordelia aid her in seeing is that she is not helpless; she does indeed allow men to lay with her, even if she dislikes it, no differently than she allows and chooses to react violently towards those she feels threatened by. Bethany is her own person and can and should control her capabilities. Cordelia sums it up best when talking to her, bluntly explaining that she could've floated the rapists away, rather than nearly killing them.

She basically illuminates that no matter how tragic or terrible the circumstances are, you can almost always make a choice, and that Bethany's reluctance to acknowledge this fact is not only destructive, but dangerous to Cordy and her friends. This strikes a chord in her, and after Angel saves her from Wolfram and Hart's grab-team, she decided that he is someone she can trust in. From here, the minor B plot, which involves the conflicting philosophy of Lilah and Holland, collides with the A. Up to this point, Lilah has not received nearly as much development her male counterparts at the firm (and this doesn't change a great deal until S3, either), but this episode gave us a better idea of what she's about.

My favourite scene of the episode was her conversation with Holland Manners, who digs into her spine as deeply as he did Lindsey's in "Blind Date" [1x21]. I particularly enjoyed his commendation of Lindsey's 'improvement' in his work. When Holland later threatens her directly, we get a full sense of what Lilah is about: Control? Well, yes. She's interested in manipulating as many angles as possible for her advantage. But the larger truth of it is that she is first and foremost interested in self-preservation. No doubt being a woman in a traditionally male field drives one to be competitive, but at the firm of Hell Incorporated the drive is likely to be massive.

A tight and well sustained death race of such a caliber has made her into a survivalist, and her first loyalties are always to her advantage. At the drop of Holland's dire suggestion, she is prepared to risk the destruction of the entire project, and initiates the plan she and her superiors discuss as the 'trigger.' This is where the plots collide, bringing Bethany's father to Angel Investigations. As far as evil plans go, it doesn't entirely suck, but it is a gamble; it may unleash Bethany's abilities to W&H's content, but at the same time it could backfire by killing everyone. What transpires, however, is entirely different from either of those scenarios.

I will stop and give special credit to the writers and producers here, as this sequence in its entirety was incredible (it helps the episode earn its 85 rather than an 80). Bethany faces her father, and nearly loses complete control. But with Angel at her side and all she's faced, she manages to conquer his influence - Wolfram and Hart's control - and exert her own (with which she uproots herself and begins a new life).

Like the three S2 episodes preceding it, this episode is chalk-full of foreshadowing. Bethany's origin and her story neatly parallel Angel's origin and his path ahead. They were both created by destructive fathers, they both let things get out of control with power far beyond their comprehension. They both have to deal with the threat of that power everyday. And like her, Angel will soon be faced with some very difficult truths about what he can and can't control in the world (in "Reprise" [2x15]).

Some final things to note: This is the only episode of Buffy, Angel or even Firefly that Joss Whedon directed, but did not write. There wasn't a great deal to directly distinguish him from other directors visually, but his talents are usually in the written word and the context of those words. The implementation of the dialogue here is very sharp and Whedonesque, and I imagine this is no coincidence.

Minor Pros/Cons (+/-)
+Wes and Cordy arguing: "Advanced bosoms?"
+Holland Manners' appearance; Sam Anderson is as cold and frightening as ever.
+The first appearance of Gunn's hubcap axe.
+Angel's little nod to the Hulk: "You wouldn't like me when I'm happy."
+Bethany completely losing control when her father arrives, and then showing complete control directly after.
-The gypsy girl. Wasn't she a much skinnier brunette in "Five by Five" [1x18]? Continuity, no? Well, no.
  • Bethany's troubles began and ended with her family. We see a link to that through Angel and his dreams with Darla, as we are to later learn that the classic-age vampires worked and hunted akin to an incestuous family unit (see:"Darla" [2x07])




DARLA:There is nothing so lovely as dreams. Everything is in them, everything hidden. Open those chambers and you can truly understand someone - and control them.
LILAH:(grins) And what's hidden in Angel's secret chambers?
DARLA:(long look) Horrors.

CORDELIA:No think. Pay. That's an order.
ANGEL:Hey! How about we pretend that you work for me?
CORDELIA:You are really unpleasant when you…
ANGEL:Then why don't we pretend that you don't.
CORDELIA:(snotty) You can't fire me. I'm vision girl. (sticks out her tongue)

GUNN:(holds up his axe, to Angel) Ah, isn't that thing? Some of the kids at my camp put it together for me. Thought I might get the chance to stick it in something now.
CORDELIA:Men are all alike.
GUNN:Fair Cordelia - you still saving my life?
CORDELIA:(looking at the computer) Every minute.
GUNN:How's that working out?
CORDELIA:You're alive, aren't you?

HOLLAND:(to Lilah) Wow. That little girl gave you one heck of a shiner, didn't she? You think the alley scenario was too much?
LILAH:I assure you, sir, I have the utmost confidence...
HOLLAND:Oh, don't utmost confidence me. You know, some people might say that you lost control over this girl. If this is how she is now, what happens when you pull the trigger? - She's got the profile, but an assassin's no good if it can't be controlled.

BETHANY:Oh, right. You love the people. (Gets up) Love them so much, you got a hundred rooms to be all alone in. I'm thinking maybe you're not exactly qualified to help me with my problem.
ANGEL:Maybe I'm the only one who is. - Try to get some sleep.
BETHANY:(pause) Who's Darla?
ANGEL:Good night, Bethany.

LILAH:Our-our firm doesn't want to lose a... you're not... (Points at Angel) He is a vampire, you know.
BETHANY:(looks at Angel, sarcastically) Weird. (leaves)
ANGEL:Looks like you're gonna have to find someone else's brain to play with.
LILAH:(smiles) Yeah, we have someone in mind.
ANGEL:Good night, Lilah. (leaves)
LILAH:Sweet dreams.

Comments (13)
All Comments | Link1 | GroundedSep 4, 2006
Love this ep. In fact I find it hard to fault it, which I guess is a blatant sign that you're going to rate it lower than me. ;)

Anyway, random question: was chaulk-full a pun?
All Comments | Link2 | Ryan-R.B. | WRITERSep 4, 2006
Caught me. Can't wait to see what other magnificent disagreements we have. Yeah, i liked the episode, but not quite to a say, a 95.
All Comments | Link3 | buffyholicFeb 18, 2008
Loved the episode. One of my S2 favorites.
All Comments | Link4 | junMar 13, 2008
Anyway, random question: was chaulk-full a pun?

Was there lots of chalk in this ep? It's been awhile...
All Comments | Link5 | JessApr 24, 2009
I really liked this episode, but I feel the beginning was a little uneven and even somewhat boring. Although, the end made up for this (it sure did pack a punch). I kinda liked Bethany, it would have been nice to see a follow up episode some time later- as you stated, the parallels with Angel could have accelerated his character growth and her character still had a lot of growing to do (and areas to explore). Good review (as always), I agree with your overall ultimatum and rating.
All Comments | Link6 | JessApr 24, 2009
I really liked this episode, but I feel the beginning was a little uneven and even somewhat boring. Although, the end made up for this (it sure did pack a punch). I kinda liked Bethany, it would have been nice to see a follow up episode some time later- as you stated, the parallels with Angel could have accelerated his character growth and her character still had a lot of growing to do (and areas to explore). Good review (as always), I agree with your overall ultimatum and rating.
All Comments | Link7 | EmilyMay 24, 2009
I think it's very telling here that Angel says he has no family in LA, when in Season 1, he says that he is Cordelia and Wesley's family. This shows that Darla is already getting to him.

Also, Bethany says she came out of a club- she was *not* dressed to go out clubbing. Kind of inconsistent.
All Comments | Link8 | nathan.taurusFeb 9, 2011 @ 10:13pm
The girl in the flashback was just another victim of Angelus and Darla. She was not in the same position as the gypsy girl had been and Angelus wasn't blindfolded so it's not a problem with continuity.

I am of two minds about the ending with the father. The least she could have done was drop him from twice the height or more so he breaks his arms and knees.

Great: Angel pretending to be a detective. Even the coffee bit was great.
All Comments | Link9 | Neil Feb 28, 2011 @ 3:30pm
I liked Bethany, a shame they never brought her back.

loved Lilas "sweet dreams" comment at the end.
All Comments | Link10 | LisaAug 26, 2012 @ 4:47pm
I know I am entering this conversation wayyyy late, but I just had to comment on the continuity between BTVS and AtS. Angel asks Cordelia if she ever had to think with a stake through her torso, and she replies, "Yes, actually. Benefits of a Sunnydale education." I loved the nod to her fall in BTVS Season 3's "Lover's Walk."
All Comments | Link11 | Iguana-on-a-stickAug 28, 2012 @ 5:11am
Replying to Lisa (#10)
It's never too late to join the discussion. :-)

But you're quite right, those little moments of continuity greatly add to the appeal of these shows. It makes the characters feel much more like actual people who've had actual experiences.
All Comments | Link12 | DaveNov 8, 2012 @ 9:07am
Bethany: "So it's a family business?"
Angel: "Friends."
All Comments | Link13 | JadOct 15, 2015 @ 2:05pm
Love Bethany I wish she would have been part of the team
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